The prisoner in the photograph is me.Hole in my life, Jack Gantos
On a sticky August evening two weeks before her due date, Ashima Ganguli stands in the kitchen of a Central Square apartment, combining Rice Krispies and Planters peanuts and chopped red onion in a bowl.The Namesake, Jhumpa Lahiri
In the land of Ingary, where such things as seven league boots and cloaks of invisibility really exist, it is quite a misfortune to be born the eldest of three.Howl’s Moving Castle, Diana Wynne Jones
I noticed writing out first sentences is like sliding them under a microscope.
By removing them from their natural habitat – the paragraph they’re resting on, you can see what they’re up too.
See what their hiding.
These three sentences all establish a world. A tone. They all introduce a character and a problem.
Come read more, they beg!
Jack is in prison.
Ashima is pregnant and alone in an apartment that doesn’t feel like home.
And while cloaks of invisibility exist in Ingary, apparently being the oldest of three is a problem.
This makes me think of the first sentences I’ve written.
Did they create the same effect?