Floodlights and Goalposts

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Shakespeare & coastguards

You can spend all day trying to think of some universal truth to set down on paper, and some poets try that. Shakespeare knew that it’s much easier to string together some words beginning with the same letter. It doesn’t matter what it’s about. It can be the exact depth in the sea to which a chap’s corpse has sunk; hardly a matter of universal interest, but if you say, ‘Full fathom five thy father lies’, you will be considered the greatest poet who ever lived. Express precisely the same thought any other way — e.g. ‘your father’s corpse is 9.144 meters below sea level’ — and you’re just a coastguard with bad news.

Mark Forsyth

Alliteration is always alluring…

That from:

Forsyth, Mark. The Elements of Eloquence: How to Turn the Perfect English Phrase. United Kingdom, Icon Books, Limited, 2014. pg. 10


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